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Sheldon@TaleTold

2 hours ago

Endings

How are the WIPs going?

This last week, Eden got my main focus somewhat to the exclusion of my Dragon Hunters story. However, I think I did some good work on both. I wasn't quite comfortable with how I had ended the fourth part of Eden, but I was hit with inspiration and wrote two new endings for it that just manage to make the book a bit more depressing than it was before. By God, I pray I can finish this series. This is supposed to be the darkest part in the whole story, and I don't want it to end here. The next book should start to shine a little ray of hope. Maybe I'm just getting carried away by my own writing.

Oh well. I've printed out the second part of Eden—so far, I'm calling it "Stained"—and my red pen is ready for battle. This one, I fear, is the weakest part of the whole collection. It has some good bits in it, but so much of the story is just me setting things up for part three. It's been a while since I've read through it, though, so maybe I'll feel differently this time around.

Regarding my Dragon Hunters, they're still trapped in that overlong chapter that just keeps growing. However, I do think I see light at the end of the tunnel now. Praying I can get through it and start moving the story forward again. I'll probably have to go back and slash a good quarter of what I've written, but I'll let it sit for now; I'll come back when I've finished the first section off and make my decision, God willing.

In other news, I finished The Infinite and the Divine. Good book, though I felt the gravity of the status quo reasserting itself in the epilogue somewhat cheapened the conclusion, though I suppose that's the cyclical nature of the story's underpinning Yin-Yang philosophy. I guess that's what you get in a long running series like this; you can't have these characters really change. Robert Rath plays with the toys and puts them back where he found them, like a good camper leaving nature untouched. Nevertheless, there is something deeply poetic in this mass market paperback; I felt it most in the image of Trazyn going down, layer by layer, into the planet. That Saturnine theme of the inevitability of time infused the whole work and almost had to be told from the alienated perspective of an undead monster like a Necron, someone for whom time and tragedy were sad memories.

I did think it was interesting how this story's ending mirrored the ending to The Scarlet Gospels, which I also read this year. Don't want to give the endings away on either one, but there were some interesting parallels in their climactic battles; even on the points where they differ in their epilogues (Clive Barker actually deals with the major changes his world and characters suffer), they both set up similar possible stories that might follow.

Anyway, it's spooky season now. Tell me your favorite ghost stories. Tell me what you're working on. Are you a Warhammer fan? What other Warhammer books should I read?

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Sheldon@TaleTold

June 17, 2024

Proof Copy of Post Mortem

A little, sneak-preview, if anyone's interested, in my novella. Still waiting for the cover as patiently as I can. (The artist isn't late or anything; I've been going crazy since I placed the order.)

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October 28, 2022

The Right Hand of Doom by Robert E. Howard

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Sheldon@TaleTold

April 22, 2022

קהלת | Ecclesiastes 1:1-11

So, I tried my hand at writing my own translation of one of my favorite passages in the Bible.

1 The words of the Preacher, son of David, King in Jerusalem.
2 Vanity of vanities, says the Preacher. Vanity of vanities; the whole is vain.
3 What is left over for man in all his toil in which he toils under the sun?
4 A generation comes and a generation goes; but the earth remains forever.
5 And the sun rises, and the sun goes [down]; And to his place, there he strives to rise.
6 Going to the South, returning to the North—turning, turning, the wind goes; And over its turning, the wind returns.
7 All the rivers run into the sea, but the sea is not full.
[From] the place where the rivers run, there they return to run.
8 All these words are tiresome. Man cannot utter [it].
The eye is not satisfied with seeing, nor the ear filled by hearing.
9 That which is is that which will be, and that which is done is that which will be done; and there is nothing wholly new under the sun.
10 Where is...

Sheldon@TaleTold

April 15, 2022

The Wind and the Trees

More Chesterton today. Another short one. Please enjoy.

Sheldon@TaleTold

September 30, 2025

Eclectic Updates | Poetry and the Divine

How are the WIPs going everyone?

I'm still working on my Dragon Hunters story. The chapter I'm on just keeps getting longer and longer. I'll probably divide it into two once I get to the end, but I'm just not sure yet where the best place for that division lies; it's hard to judge until I have the ending set.

I've also nearly memorized "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe. I say 'nearly' because, though I'm seemingly able to recite any one verse, trying to do the whole thing in one go is still a bit of a challenge, and the latter verses, which I haven't spent as much time on, are still a little rough. However, now I'm also working on memorizing "Ode on a Grecian Urn" by Keats.

I think more people should memorize poetry. It's like eating something. Once you get the words in your mind, they get digested and become a part of you more so than from reading it. It's also fun to recite poems, now and again, even if you're only doing it for yourself. The first poem I ever memorized was "Stopping ...

Sheldon@TaleTold

September 22, 2025

Shy of Perfection

How are the WIPs going?

I was hoping to break 20k last week in my Dragon Hunters Story. Got close, 19k rounding up. So, God willing, I'll pass that and more this week. It's a lot of fun writing this one. It's getting a bit longer than I expected it to get. I was thinking it would be divided into three sections each about 20k words long for a neat little package of about 60k. It's looking more like this first section might reach 30k. Oh well, if the book expands too much, I'll just divide it into a series of short novellas instead.

In other writing news, I'm slowly working through my draft for Eden's fourth part with a red pen in hand and a depressing playlist in ear. Make of that what you will. There are some really moving parts to The Crimes of Rick, but if I can't write part five, I don't think I'll publish this; I wouldn't want to leave the series on the same note as Mostly Harmless, the trilogy's fifth installment, left The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy. Let the reader understand....

Sheldon@TaleTold

September 15, 2025

Distractions?

How are the WIPs going?

I admit, I let the news about Charlie Kirk become a sort of time sink for me that ate into everything, including my writing time. I did write a little, but always incredibly distractedly. I couldn't think about anything else. So, I focused on revisions and polishing.

Strange thing is, I was never a Charlie Kirk fan. I'd heard of him, vaguely knew he was a conservative, and that was about it. Still, the death of this complete stranger has gripped me in a way I can't explain. I don't think I had ever watched a single video of him until now.

In less depressing news: I almost have the cover locked in on Storm of Monsters. Another proof should be arriving tomorrow, and I'm hoping I can give it the go ahead. Also, while skimming through a copy of While the Elephants Danced, I found more typos. How they keep appearing, I don't know. I have hired editors. I have read through these pages more times than I know. Still, I always miss something. It's very frustrating....

Sheldon@TaleTold

May 19, 2025

A Bit of My Writing Process

How I Outline

How are the WIPs going?

I have, over the past few weeks, been working on a pair of short stories I hope to submit to a horror podcast, The Other Stories. They want cosmic horror. On a day off, I wrote one in a single sitting, but felt there was another story there. When I saw that authors were allowed to contribute two stories per theme, I thought I would bide my time and see if I could write the other, more ethereal story that I sensed was there.

Now that I have written this second story, at least the better part of it—it wants a stronger ending—I feel there is still more to be written. A series of these short stories might make an interesting read, perhaps even amount to a novella. Who knows? However, now and again, as regards my posts here, I sometimes think it would be a good idea to share some of my own writing/outlining methods.

One of the things I do when I see a project developing like this is to ascertain what patterns are showing themselves. Very often, when I'm writing poetry, there is some line or couplet that appears to me, and the rest of the poem pours out of that initial inspiration. I study what I have been given and ask myself: What are the patterns inherent in this and where is it going?

So, if I were to do that with this pair of stories I find a few patterns/themes:

Horror stories revolving around one POV
Retrospective
Themes of Love + Death
Themes of Chesterton's God, the gods, the philosophers, and the demons
1. God: Padre C
  Believes in a purity of original uncreated/being
2. The gods: Giovanni
  Paradoxically believing in everything and nothing
3. The Philosophers: The Doctor
  Believes in Death
4. The Demons: Jasper
  Hail Satan
Nyarlathotep vs Hastur :: Satan vs Death
1. Order vs Chaos
  1. Nyarlathotep's schemes vs Hastur's madness
  2. Nyarlathotep's temple vs Hastur's decay
2. Weakened will (seduction) vs blackmail (threats)
3. Contract vs Betrayal
4. Human sacrifice vs suicide

Anyway, That's just a quick riff. I don't always write these things out; often, I just think them through. The next question would be where the meta story is going, that is, what is its endpoint/cathartic moment. Now, I have one hint as to the next step, to follow the doctor character, who seems somewhat suspicious, and also to fill in the Chesterton pattern. As such, two more stories appear, one following the doctor and one following Jasper.

So, that's just a little insight into how my thinking process works. I don't know if I'll pursue this possible story or not. Either way, let me know what you think, what you're working on, and what your writing process looks like.

Keep writing.

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Sheldon@TaleTold

October 24, 2023

Writing Prompt: Lovecraft

After my disappointment with The Lovecraft Investigations, I thought it would be a good idea to write our own Lovecraft inspired work.

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Sheldon@TaleTold

August 07, 2023

My (Insane?) Plans

I saw an interesting question posed on twitter: Would you write an entire book series and not publish a single book until it's all done? Now, that is precisely what I've been doing, or, perhaps I should say, what I've been planning. Right now, I've somewhat given up on traditional publishing, partially as it seems like traditional publishers want me to do the marketing as well as the writing, and partially because it seems like most forms I fill out ask me how well I've self-published my own work so far.

So, I started to consider whether to self-publish the book I have written, and it seemed to me that since I had already organized it into three major sections, each about the length of a short novel, it would make sense to self-publish it in those organic pieces. As my original outline extended beyond this book, I figured I ought to finish writing to the end of my outline. That should make a fourth part. Furthermore, when I finished that outline, I jotted down a few notes for a continuation of the story. I've been working on a new outline, off and on (mostly off), and hope to finish it and add it to this possible series, thereby reaching a total of either five or six parts.

Now, why do I want to chop up my story like this? For one, I think these breaks in the story make sense. Also, one piece of advice I've heard about self-publishing is to keep a steady flow of work coming out. So, before I self-publish, I want have a ready well of titles to publish at regular intervals. My overarching plan is to, over the next two to three years, get ten titles ready, half or so consisting of this series and the other half based on a few short outlines I've jotted down here and there throughout the years. Then, take the leap and self-publish.

Am I being stupid?
Would you try something like this?
Have you written any series?

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