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August 04, 2026
Story VS Writing

How are the WIPs going?

Sorry, my post is a day late. Life sort of got in the way. Admittedly, I've not even looked at my writing. Last week I went to work and slept; that was all I had time for, and I didn't always get time for the whole sleeping thing either. Traffic is so bad, it feels like I'm spending most of my life going under ten miles per hour down the highway trying desperately to stay awake.

I had a writing question, though. Having friends that are into Warhammer, I know a little of the lore, and was persuaded to read the popular title, The Infinite and the Divine, which I very much enjoyed; I've even pre-ordered the sequel, though the good Lord knows when I'll have time to read it. Keeping with the theme, I started reading The Twice-Dead King Omnibus, which is a less satirical look at the same alien race called Necrons. What strikes me is that The Twice-Dead King has the better story, but The Infinite and the Divine has the better writing.

Have you ever read a book and felt that the story was stronger than the actual writing? There is an aspect to this writing that I don't know how to put into words, yet, but seems to me a sort of recurring mistake this author makes. It falls under the Show; Don't Tell rule, but it's a bit more specific than that.

Oh well, until I find a new place closer to work, I'm spending about two hours of my day driving. Thankfully, with audiobooks, I hope the time is not entirely wasted. I hope you all are writing and making progress on your WIPs as I hope I can eventually get back to mine.

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June 17, 2024
Proof Copy of Post Mortem

A little, sneak-preview, if anyone's interested, in my novella. Still waiting for the cover as patiently as I can. (The artist isn't late or anything; I've been going crazy since I placed the order.)

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October 28, 2022
The Right Hand of Doom by Robert E. Howard

A little something to enjoy before Halloween.

The Right Hand of Doom by Robert E. Howard
April 22, 2022
קהלת | Ecclesiastes 1:1-11

So, I tried my hand at writing my own translation of one of my favorite passages in the Bible.

1 The words of the Preacher, son of David, King in Jerusalem.
2 Vanity of vanities, says the Preacher. Vanity of vanities; the whole is vain.
3 What is left over for man in all his toil in which he toils under the sun?
4 A generation comes and a generation goes; but the earth remains forever.
5 And the sun rises, and the sun goes [down]; And to his place, there he strives to rise.
6 Going to the South, returning to the North—turning, turning, the wind goes; And over its turning, the wind returns.
7 All the rivers run into the sea, but the sea is not full.
[From] the place where the rivers run, there they return to run.
8 All these words are tiresome. Man cannot utter [it].
The eye is not satisfied with seeing, nor the ear filled by hearing.
9 That which is is that which will be, and that which is done is that which will be done; and there is nothing wholly new under the sun.
10 Where is...

קהלת | Ecclesiastes 1:1-11
April 15, 2022
The Wind and the Trees

More Chesterton today. Another short one. Please enjoy.

The Wind and the Trees
July 27, 2026
Methods

How are the WIPs going?

Mine got stalled this last week. I was pretty sick again. I wish I knew some way to stop getting so sick so often. Oh well, I've mostly stopped coughing.

I've been doing a lot more writing by hand since I bought my ReMarkable a few weeks ago. I don't really know if it's helping me creatively or not. Makes me wonder what sort of devices you use to write. To date, most of my writing has taken place on a keyboard. I'm a good enough typist; a better typist than a scribbler, I fear. I suppose the one form of composition I haven't tried is dictation. With how long my drive home is, it might not be the worst idea in the world to try.

Hope you get a lot of writing done this week. See you Monday.

July 20, 2026
Plot, Character, and Something More

How are the WIPs going?

I got a little done on my dragon hunters' story, and I'm waiting on some promotional material for Post-Mortem.

I was thinking again this week about the dichotomy of plot vs. character. Some people prefer to focus on character, or characters, on the relations between persons in the story and their internal changes of perspective and behavior. I have a hard time thinking up examples for this in literature. The "Wind in the Willows" comes to mind. The events of the plot are almost interruption and seem to only exist to give the characters opportunities to show themselves. Outside of literature, however, something like Scooby-Doo appeals to me; the plots are almost always the same in broad strokes while the details are often absurd. Scooby and the gang are the ones we love and come back for no matter how indefensibly silly the events become.

Plot, however, has its champions as well. Offhand, the "Foundation Series" comes to mind. The first book, at least, is almost a ...

July 13, 2026

How are the WIPs going?

I actually felt pretty good about the work I put in on mine this last week. I caught a cold, you see, and slept about twelve hours each night, taking naps throughout the day as well. I slept, and when I didn't sleep, I wrote. My mind hasn't been this clear in a long time.

In my dragon hunters' story I have now reviewed everything I've written for it, rewriting some of the rougher sections and adding a few new paragraphs here and there as they were wanted, as well as working on a plotting issue that came up. Part of what I'm trying to do with this book is to make a sort of jungle of literary references to weird stories, primarily Poe. However, I think it's time to add a little of "ya boi" Lovecraft to the pot; primarily, I realized that the imagery used in The Outsider was just the thing I needed for a transition. Oh well, I finally have the idea; it is for me to write it now.

With my vampire novella, I have been working on it, perhaps spending more time with ...

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A Bit of My Writing Process
How I Outline

How are the WIPs going?

I have, over the past few weeks, been working on a pair of short stories I hope to submit to a horror podcast, The Other Stories. They want cosmic horror. On a day off, I wrote one in a single sitting, but felt there was another story there. When I saw that authors were allowed to contribute two stories per theme, I thought I would bide my time and see if I could write the other, more ethereal story that I sensed was there.

Now that I have written this second story, at least the better part of it—it wants a stronger ending—I feel there is still more to be written. A series of these short stories might make an interesting read, perhaps even amount to a novella. Who knows? However, now and again, as regards my posts here, I sometimes think it would be a good idea to share some of my own writing/outlining methods.

One of the things I do when I see a project developing like this is to ascertain what patterns are showing themselves. Very often, when I'm writing poetry, there is some line or couplet that appears to me, and the rest of the poem pours out of that initial inspiration. I study what I have been given and ask myself: What are the patterns inherent in this and where is it going?

So, if I were to do that with this pair of stories I find a few patterns/themes:

  1. Horror stories revolving around one POV
  2. Retrospective
  3. Themes of Love + Death
  4. Themes of Chesterton's God, the gods, the philosophers, and the demons
    1. God: Padre C
      Believes in a purity of original uncreated/being
    2. The gods: Giovanni
      Paradoxically believing in everything and nothing
    3. The Philosophers: The Doctor
      Believes in Death
    4. The Demons: Jasper
      Hail Satan
  5. Nyarlathotep vs Hastur :: Satan vs Death
    1. Order vs Chaos
      1. Nyarlathotep's schemes vs Hastur's madness
      2. Nyarlathotep's temple vs Hastur's decay
    2.  Weakened will (seduction) vs blackmail (threats)
    3. Contract vs Betrayal
    4. Human sacrifice vs suicide

Anyway, That's just a quick riff. I don't always write these things out; often, I just think them through. The next question would be where the meta story is going, that is, what is its endpoint/cathartic moment. Now, I have one hint as to the next step, to follow the doctor character, who seems somewhat suspicious, and also to fill in the Chesterton pattern. As such, two more stories appear, one following the doctor and one following Jasper.

So, that's just a little insight into how my thinking process works. I don't know if I'll pursue this possible story or not. Either way, let me know what you think, what you're working on, and what your writing process looks like.

Keep writing.

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October 24, 2023
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Writing Prompt: Lovecraft

After my disappointment with The Lovecraft Investigations, I thought it would be a good idea to write our own Lovecraft inspired work.

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August 07, 2023
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My (Insane?) Plans

I saw an interesting question posed on twitter: Would you write an entire book series and not publish a single book until it's all done? Now, that is precisely what I've been doing, or, perhaps I should say, what I've been planning. Right now, I've somewhat given up on traditional publishing, partially as it seems like traditional publishers want me to do the marketing as well as the writing, and partially because it seems like most forms I fill out ask me how well I've self-published my own work so far.

 

So, I started to consider whether to self-publish the book I have written, and it seemed to me that since I had already organized it into three major sections, each about the length of a short novel, it would make sense to self-publish it in those organic pieces. As my original outline extended beyond this book, I figured I ought to finish writing to the end of my outline. That should make a fourth part. Furthermore, when I finished that outline, I jotted down a few notes for a continuation of the story. I've been working on a new outline, off and on (mostly off), and hope to finish it and add it to this possible series, thereby reaching a total of either five or six parts.

 

Now, why do I want to chop up my story like this? For one, I think these breaks in the story make sense. Also, one piece of advice I've heard about self-publishing is to keep a steady flow of work coming out. So, before I self-publish, I want have a ready well of titles to publish at regular intervals. My overarching plan is to, over the next two to three years, get ten titles ready, half or so consisting of this series and the other half based on a few short outlines I've jotted down here and there throughout the years. Then, take the leap and self-publish.

 

  • Am I being stupid?
  • Would you try something like this?
  • Have you written any series?
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